My athlete diary

This is My athlete diary. I wrote this because of how I would have felt if I was a athlete and the feeling that an athlete would feel competing in the underwater hurdles race for Olympics. The hard part about it would have probably been using more higher level words. I also wrote this to learn how to put descriptive detail into my writing.

Gold coast

This is my writing of something I didn't do in the holiday's. I also learnt how to use more appropriate word's instead of said,went,going and get. So now I've posted my work on my blog for everyone to read.

My family

Last week were learning how to write a metaphor. We compared our family with a box of chocolate. It was really fun learning how to write metaphors Last week. Here is mine.

The box of chocolate

My family lives in a shiny dark purple and most wanted to be brought  box of chocolate…………..

My brother Zlynd is a sticky caramel chocolate that is  soft centered in the middle, but on the outside he is chunky and strong. My brother  Te tau is the tender chocolate, his hands are always doing hard work . My sister Dijontae is the raspberry chocolate that is sweet with a red on the inside and and brown on the outside, she is kind and ferocious. Angel is a hard top deck chocolate that is solid and sensitive. Daniel is a lumpy bumpy snickers that is always energetic and admirable. Edekai is a crumbly flake that  is soft and cheeky. Ru is a light bumpy snickers that is gentle and small. William is a bubbly chocolate with light green eyes, and he is chubby cheeky and soft centered. Lastly I’m the box that holds the brotherly sisterly bond together.

5 Random facts about me

My favorite sport is Ki-o-rahi
My favorite colour is Blue.
My favorite animal is panda.
My nickname is Patrick.
I am the youngest girl in the family of 9 including myself with 6 brothers and 2 sisters.